Welcome to the second week of the A-Z challenge 2020!
Want to get a quick recap before today’s post?
Here is the link for my last post.
Here is the link for my first post.
Graciela’s POV
Slow traffic on a Saturday morning. I was getting increasingly late for work.
It was 9:10 when I reached work that morning. God I hated being late. It throws me off my routine. Now I won’t have that first 10 minutes to myself and my coffee. And because of that this whole day is just going to spiral down.
While I was mentally bracing myself for the day at work and the case at hand, some random dude bumped into me. I almost spilled my coffee on myself. So close. I was going to yell at the guy when I realised it was John.
“What are you doing here John?”
John Gavish was another detective in our office who headed and handled the stolen goods and armed robbery cases. We were the homicide department. I was genuinely surprised to see him on this side of the bureau.
“Actually Graciela I was looking for you”
“Oh John. Can we please catch up over lunch or something. I have a case that I-“
“ I think I can identify the victim”
“John are you serious!? Do you even know-“
“I read the newspaper this morning. The old photo of her’s, I recognised instantly. I called her a dozen times right after and she didn’t answer. I drove over to her house but it was completely empty. I asked her neighbour, they said she moved out a couple of weeks ago. I didn’t know what else to do, so I came here.”
“Wait! So you know her personally?”
“WAIT! You don’t know her? “
“ No John I don’t. Who is she? How do you know her?”
“Graciela I’m so surprised you don’t know who she is. How is this even possible. You’re telling me you’ve never seen her before? Wow. This is such a shocker. You might want to sit down for this Grace.”
I have a feeling that Graciela is about to get a real shock! I can’t wait for tomorrow.
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Yup!
Thank you!
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What a cliffhanger! See you tomorrow.
E is for…!
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Thank you 🙂
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whoa…..waiting breathlessly! Cheers! https://katheatoz.blogspot.com/
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Aww thank you 🙂
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Oh come on! Way to keep us sucked in!
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Haha, thank you 🙂
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Wow, now that’s how you do a cliffhanger!
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Thank you 😊
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… and? Pfff, let’s wait until tomorrow ;))
E is for Embroirery
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Ahh, who is it!?
Stopping by from the A to Z Blog Challenge!
Erotic Fiction: https://jrvincente.wordpress.com/a-to-z-2020
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Nothing like leaving us in suspense. 🙂
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Can’t wait for the next bit!
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And the plot thickens…….this is really getting to be rivetting.
https://mumbaionahigh.com/2020/04/daily-prayers-and-the-sanskrit-effect.html
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You definitely know how to end on a cliff hanger! Arghhhh! 😂 Now this is a master class on how to end a chapter😉
Tasha 💖
Virginia’s Parlour – The Manor (Adult concepts – nothing explicit in posts)
Tasha’s Thinkings – Vampire Drabbles
P.S. Sorry for being late to comment – been running around getting all done for my podcast launch today.
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That’s totally okay. Thank you so much!
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Oooo.. left it hanging there!
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You’re drawing out the suspense – sneaky. Have you written the whole case/story, TDG, or are you keeping your options open for the ending?
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Haha, thank you
I’ve gotten up to K, but I have an idea as to where it could go.. but it could really be anything at this point.
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I suspect my ending, last year, was written after I started posting so I understand what you’re doing. But as a plotter I would have had an outline to work to – and deviate from.
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Yeah! Like I have a sense of who is who and what is what but it just the details, the timelines etc etc that I have to figure out and oh also the narrative!
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The good thing is I am binge reading. So I don’t have to wait for a couple of hours before some more light falls on the mystery!
I hope Grace doesn’t have a nasty surprise in store.
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That is my favourite too!
Binge reading!!
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Now I’m too curious. How is it possible that Graciela doesn’t know this woman and she would supposed to?
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Often the things we are searching for happen to be right under noses.
Or if it glasses, then on top of your head 😛
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